[Pyrro]

Right now I'm working on a scene that is far from completion. So far I have the basic walls of the room and a elevator shaft with some stone pillar supports next to it with lights. Tell me what you think and feed back. Be as harsh as you want, I want to improve the scene to look awesome.

[rogue_zero_one]

that's pretty good... it isn't going to be all monochrome is it? are we looking into the elevator shaft? looks good anyhow...

[dehshizknight]

Holy crap, you did a great job on the textures of the wall. There's actually nothing wrong with it.

Are you going for a decrepit look? If so, you got the walls looking perfect but maybe you could "rust" the elevator shaft or whatever it is. If the scene is showing the technological advancement of everything, leave it the way it it. Lol, you wouldn't want to show rusty Area 51 equipment if you're going to show a lot of it.

[Pyrro]

Originally Posted by rogue_zero_one

that's pretty good... it isn't going to be all monochrome is it? are we looking into the elevator shaft? looks good anyhow...

Thanks man. Yeah that's the elevator shaft.

Holy crap, you did a great job on the textures of the wall. There's actually nothing wrong with it.

Are you going for a decrepit look? If so, you got the walls looking perfect but maybe you could "rust" the elevator shaft or whatever it is. If the scene is showing the technological advancement of everything, leave it the way it it. Lol, you wouldn't want to show rusty Area 51 equipment if you're going to show a lot of it.

Well, what I was wanting to do is make the room look a little bit old showing that the facility has been up and running for a few decades but then show that they care enough about it to continuously update the base with new features. I.e new elevators, new security locks or precautions. Then mix it with the old features of a old cement wall and old military type lighting.

[JR2576]

Looks good... better then I could... but if u r looking for comments or ideas to better enhance it... I have few ideas...

1. Since its a elevator shaft and to spice of the monochrome look.. add a few yellow warning signs,, like ...

or


2. Also maybe add a CCTV Camera for security purposes...
3. Not sure if u are able too or not... but if u are looking for it be old... but up-to-date,,, keep with the hightech stuff like u said but add cobwebs or spiderwebs.
4. in the circle area the pillar has no ending point,,, it looks like a half circle no definition of where pillar ends

5. Also can u soften the edges of the light circles,,, since theres no lamp shade or what not there should be no hard defining lines of where the light emitted ends,,, hope this helps and keep up the good work.

[Pyrro]

I just might add those to the scene JR. I think the boxy lighting was caused by a bad angle. I'll have to take another render to see if it can be fixed.

I'll keep you updated.